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This page has a collection of short essays on storytelling, academic writing, sentence composition, and grammar, with the occasional drawing. You can use the category tags to find posts on specific subjects or just browse through the main library. If you want a monthly roundup of new content, you can register for updates using the signup at the bottom of the page.
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Spike That Comma: When to Mess with a Compound Predicate
Commas are such great fun. Using them properly, sticking them where they don’t belong, leaving them out entirely—you can bring a lot of voice to your prose when you get crafty with commas, and not just in fiction or other forms of creative writing.

Paul Carlucci
5 min read


How This Symbol Works: Blue in The Land in Winter by Andrew Miller
In The Land in Winter by Andrew Miller, blue is a rich and complicated symbol, explored in this article.

Paul Carlucci
4 min read


Part 3. In Praise of the Passive Voice: Effacing the Subject to Showcase the Object
The passive voice is frequently misunderstood, particularly in academic writing and by academic advisors, but it has its place. The final entry of this three-part post series teaches you when to use it.

Paul Carlucci
5 min read


Part 2. In Praise of the Passive Voice: Effacing the Subject to Showcase the Object
The passive voice is frequently misunderstood, particularly in academic writing and by academic advisors, but it has its place. Part 2 of a three-part post series teaches you exactly what it is.

Paul Carlucci
3 min read


Part 1. In Praise of the Passive Voice: Effacing the Subject to Showcase the Object
The passive voice is frequently misunderstood, particularly in academic writing and by academic advisors, but it has its place. Part 1 of a three-part post series teaches you exactly what it is.

Paul Carlucci
4 min read


How This Setting Works: Rural Montana in Winter Range by Claire Davis
Literary crime drama Winter Range by Claire Davis shows how authors can turn settings into characters.

Paul Carlucci
4 min read


How This Theme Works: Transition in Mayflies by Andrew O’Hagan
Mayflies by Andrew O'Hagan is a novel about transition and the lack thereof. Here's how he builds the theme early.

Paul Carlucci
4 min read


Rediscover All Hope (Ye Who Hire a Helpful Editor)
Good editors help you see things deadline pressure obscures.

Paul Carlucci
0 min read


How to Write Better Academia: Organize Your Thoughts with a Narrowing Focus
How to write better academia by narrowing your focus throughout your work.

Paul Carlucci
3 min read


How This Style Works: Peter's Troubled Interiors in Intermezzo by Sally Rooney
In Intermezzo, Sally Rooney uses various types of sentence fragments to create Peter's troubled thoughts.

Paul Carlucci
3 min read


A Lament for the Em Dash
AI has given em dashes a bad rep, but there's precedent—and support.

Paul Carlucci
0 min read


How This Style Works: Lesser Ruins by Mark Haber
In Lesser Ruins, Mark Haber's expansive style really sells the story. One tool he uses is the absolute phrase.

Paul Carlucci
3 min read


Controlling Emphasis with "Not Only . . . But Also"
Using "not only . . . but also" constructions in your non-fiction writing is a little more difficult than you might initially think.

Paul Carlucci
2 min read
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